The Quite woods

Once upon a time there was a family of 7 2 boys named jay and mike and 3 girls named Te Aumhi leilani janey and peyton.One day their parents were Going on a date the mum said remember to not go in the woods but they didn’t listen after a while Jay was getting bored so he goes upstairs to chill when he hears the ar go he ran downstairs waking his siblings up saying wake up wake up their gone so lets get ready to play we have and andventer in the Quiet wood’s todaySo they rush out to find new things in the woods today.After a few hours of walking they were getting bored so they walk back when mike steps on something leading to a secret passageway they go inside all scred and horrified and terrified but then as they go inside depper they were getting a feeling something was wrong but they shove it off and ept walking but after a while they hear a noise Te Aumhi frozen and pointed behind them she runs out screaming then they all turned around and screamed they saw a big dragon with two heads looking at them scardly they run out screaming and when they rush out Screaming to death but the louder they shouted the quiet it was and this is why it was called quiet wood’s now back to the storie so they all rush but then janey falls down and sprang her ankle she tries to get up but she falls then she heard a noise she was scared she looked behind her and saw the monster looking at her then he grabbed her leg were she had grace her knee and sprained her ankle then the she was screaming in pain her ankle was sore then he killed her one by one with blood dripping from his mouth to the floor.Few minutes later Mike turns around to see if janey was behind but when he did he had saw she was not there so he goes looking for her but then he heard a stomp so he looks behind him and there he is again looking at Mike hungerly Mike freeze’s then the monster grabs him from the leg and threw him in the air going into his mouth then chewing him slowly when he smells something like peyton ,Jay,Leilani and Te Aumhi then he goes looking for them thats when Te Aumhi released mike and janey were missing but she couldn't do anything then she kept on running when Jay,Peyton,Lelani look and see they are not there so then they start looking for them when they hear a big stomp then they knew it was him so they tried to run but then they all fall into a trap getting stuck they struggled to get out and they tried to get out but then they heard another stomp witch sound really close and that when they knew they were gonna die so they said their last words and finally were made into lunch.Few Hours Of Running Lelani stops too look when she sees there not there so she goes searching and thats when she forgot about Te Aumhi but she knew she would be alright and she was right but she wasn't so then she runs trying to find them when she hears a loud sound and then she ran but then she was grabbed by the leg getting scars then there her into the air right into his mouth then Te Aumhi made but then she looks and they are not there but she sees her parents are coming back so she rushes to the back door and goes upstairs and fake sleeps when her parents come upstairs and see shes sleeping and forgot about the others.

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